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It took a while, but eventually, Diana became used to being a duchess. She rose each day and met her staff, going over the events of the day. Then she dined with her parents for breakfast and Fitz relayed any details of the happenings of the Dukedom. Her parents loved hearing all sorts of matters of business, their way of staying connected with the happenings of the world. And when the morning duties were over, they often had a leisurely afternoon and evening.
Sometimes they would all spend the day reading to one another, dining on Cook’s excellent food, and discussing their future together. Other times they hosted small dinner parties with other families in the neighborhood. Diana watched as Fitz became more personal with his rank and responsibilities. They visited his tenants together by carriage and sometimes on foot if the weather was nice. They’d ensure the people had everything they needed, that his tenants were not going without. Diana saw that Fitz was still as kind and considerate as ever, even after their first year of marriage passed away.
It was in their second year of marriage that Diana finally conceived a child. It wasn’t because they didn’t try often, for their nights were often spent tangled in each other’s arms, but Diana figured that it was God’s way of giving Fitz and Diana time together before children started to make an appearance. And now, as winter set into the lands of England, Diana’s middle was very round and tight with the impending birth of her first child. She walked the manor’s hallways, feeling pains come and go through her body. Her midwife walked with her, ensuring that what she was feeling was perfectly normal.
“I think I would like to visit the family for a moment,” Diana said, feeling bored with all the walking she’d been doing that day to encourage her child to be born.
“Are you sure, Your Grace? There are children present,” her midwife said.
“I am sure. For it shall only be for a moment. I simply am growing tired and must rest for a bit,” Diana said.
“Very well, Your Grace.” Her midwife then led her to the drawing-room where the majority of her family was gathered. Since it was nearing the holiday season, her three siblings and their families had come to the country to remain with them till spring. It had been one of her requirements any time they asked her for money, which seemed more often than not.
“Ah, there she is,” Lady Casey said as Diana stepped into the room, her arm being braced by her midwife. Fitz quickly turned to her from his position at the fireplace and crossed the room in two strides, his face stricken with fear and worry.
“How are you feeling?” he asked, causing Diana to giggle.
“I don’t feel very well,” Diana admitted. “But I’ve been assured that this is all very normal.”
“Come, sit,” her midwife encouraged, leading her to a chair to rest for a bit.
“Aunty! When will the baby be here?” asked one of her nieces as she sat down, pulling their attention from their games of building a castle with wooden blocks and manning it with little tin soldiers.
“I hope the baby will come any moment so I won’t feel so tired or exhausted anymore,” Diana explained. “But there is no telling when that will happen.”
“I labored with Joseph for thirteen hours and only thirty minutes with Madeline,” Melissa said in a cheerful voice. “You never really know what will happen.”
“Is there anything I can do for you?” Fitz asked, sitting next to her.
“You need only worry about yourself, my dear. I don’t need you exhausted as well,” Diana replied.
“I don’t think I’ll get one minute of sleep this night till I know for sure that you are well and this child has been born.”
“Then you might be in for a long night,” Lord Duncan spoke up, causing the others to chuckle with him. Fitz simply smiled, taking Diana’s hand in his and squeezing it. Diana squeezed back, much harder as spasms started to ripple through her body, causing her to focus on her breathing till the feeling finally passed.
“You’re doing great, Your Grace,” her midwife said in a very comforting tone. She withdrew a clean cloth from her apron and patted Diana’s forward as she began to sweat from the pain.
“I think it’s time I retired to my bed-chamber for the rest of the labor. Perhaps a tub could be put together so the hot water can soothe my aching muscles. And do you think Cook could prepare a minced meat pie for me?” Diana asked, her voice growing weak as the pain finally subsided for a moment.
Fitz leaned forward and kissed her forehead before saying, “Yes, my dear. I will have all those things done for you.” Diana nodded then as the two helped her to her feet. She bid her family good evening, that in the morning they could all come to see the babe after they’d received some much-needed rest. Diana received all sorts of compliments and well-wishes before the midwife braced her arms once more and helped her walk from the room, all the way down the hallway, up the stairs, and finally to her own bed-chamber. By the time she was finally settled in her bed, the spasms were coming more frequently and stronger.
“Why does the birthing of a child have to be so painful,” Diana whined as her midwife helped her to get comfortable in the bed. She chuckled in response as she helped the maids set up a tub for her to relax in.
“If birthing was truly easy, I think women would be with child all the time and the world would become overpopulated,” the midwife said between her laughter. “But don’t you worry, Your Grace. This child will be here soon and all your pains and troubles will then be forgotten.”
By the time her bath had been prepared, Diana was eager to get out of her clothing because she’d become very hot. Her undergarments were all soaked from the pain she’d been experiencing. As she was helped into the tub, the hot water meeting her skin in a warm embrace, she felt she could finally relax. Sitting down in the water, Diana let out a deep sigh of relief. Even when the spasms came again, they didn’t feel so painful now that she was completely submerged in the glorious hot water.
“I feel like I could stay like this all day,” Diana said. “The days grow so cold, and this water feels so good.”
“Ask your lady’s maid to build up the fire so you stay warm,” the midwife suggested. Diana did as recommended and had the maids build up the fire. Then, the three of them stood at the ready for what else they might be needed for. Diana felt warm and safe, and for a short time thought she could fall asleep in the tub, listening to the midwife hum to her as she brushed her hair.
But suddenly, everything changed. A new sensation swept through her body, telling her mind to bear down. The spasms were now frequent and more intense than before, making her feel rather uncomfortable once more.
“Oh, I think the baby is coming,” Diana said in a panicked voice. “I can feel the need to push now.”
“Now we’re getting to the good part,” the midwife said in a happy voice. She came around the tub and looked down at Diana through the tub. “Now brace your knees and open wide.”
If this had been any other situation, Diana would have been appalled. But she was desperate to have her child and be done with the birthing. And if it meant she could remain in the tub, she was willing to stay put and do as the midwife directed her. When a wave of pain shot through her body, she bared her teeth and began to push just like her body felt the need to.
“Good, my dear, very good. When the pain comes, use it to your advantage. When you need to push, bear down. When it leaves you, rest for a minute,” the midwife coaxed, coming to kneel beside the tub as she gently pushed on Diana’s stomach.
After a few minutes of doing this, Diana was starting to become very exhausted. She wasn’t sure if she should simply rest and try again later. But when the midwife told her just a few more pushes, she gathered the last of her strength and began to try again.
“That’s it, Your Grace. Now, reach down and pull up your baby,” the midwife said in an excited voice. Diana followed her words and was soon retrieving a small child from the water below, laying the infant on her chest as it began to cry from being birthed. Diana cried as well, tears of relief flooding from her eyes, mixed with the immense joy she felt.
“You just stay there and let me do the rest,” the midwife said. Diana paid little attention to what she was doing as she held her crying child, thankful for such a healthy babe.
Not too long afterward, Diana was helped from the tub. Her child was taken and wrapped in clean clothes as Diana was dried and dressed as well. She was placed into bed and allowed to hold her child, the midwife teaching her how to feed the little one as well.
“Congratulations, Your Grace. You have a beautiful little boy who seems very healthy and eager to be here,” the midwife said as she patted Diana’s head lovingly. “I shall let the Duke know that it is safe to finally enter.”
Diana was all smiles as the midwife left and soon came back with Fitz. He looked as anxious and worried as he did earlier in the day, but as he rounded the bed and peered down at Diana nursing their son, he seemed to finally still, a smile coming to his lips as he knelt beside the bed.
“My dear, may I introduce you to our son,” Diana said in a soft voice, knowing that she’d need to sleep soon.
“I have a son?” he whispered back, looking from the babe to Diana. She nodded in reply, feeling so much love and joy quickly grow for her and Fitz. Together, they watched their child until they both grew tired. Then, they all crawled into bed together and watched over their son.
“I love you so much, Diana. Thank you for giving me a son,” Fitz whispered as he stroked Diana’s hair. She was almost asleep and woke briefly to smile up at her husband.
“I love you too, Fitz. I know together we shall raise this fine boy and one day he will then be Duke of Chatham,” Diana replied, her eyes falling shut once more. Diana knew that she hadn’t ever been happier than she was now. Not when she was married, not when she realized she was in love with Fitz. This moment was the final piece in her life. She now knew what her purpose was, and that was to raise a family and share her deep love for all of them. This was only the beginning for the Duke of Chatham and his Duchess.
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Hello there, my dearest readers! I hope you enjoyed the book and the Extended Epilogue! I will be waiting for your comments here. Thank you 😊
I really enjoyed The Duke’s Tempting Bride. I enjoyed the extended epilogue with the all the family in attendance and the rule to borrow they had to spend time in the country. I really hope you will write more about the Duke and Duchess and there children. How things go for them and how things progress in the village and the Baker’s daughter. This was another great book. Thank you Lucy Langton. I really look forward to more of your books.
HI LUCY I REALLY ENJOYED “THE DUKES TEMPTING BRIDE” AS DIANA WAS THE PERFECT BRIDE FOR FITZ AND GAVE HIM SO MUCH JOY AND HAPPINESS! EVEN BY ACCIDENT FINDING OUT WHO KILLED HIS FIRST WIFE AND WHY BECAUSE THE SAME WOMAN TRIED TO KILL HER!
WHICH HELPED HER BELOVED HUSBANDS HEART HEAL AND FIND CLOSURE TO THAT MYSTERY! THEN FINDING OUT HER BROTHER HAD MEDICAL SKILLS AND SAVED DIANA WHO WAS TO BE THE DUKES SECOND WIFE WHO THE DUKE LOVED DEARLY! THE EPILOGUE WAS FANTASTIC IN HOW SHE BROUGHT HER FAMILY TOGETHER BY STAYING IN THE COUNTRY FOR THE WINTER! I LOVED THE PART WHEN DIANA GOT PREGNANT AND GAVE HER BELOVED HUSBAND THE DUKE A SON TO CARRY ON HIS NAME AFTER SHE GAVE BIRTH TO THE BABY IN HER BATH!
LUCY I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE ABOUT THE DUKE AND DUCHESS, THEIR SON AND HOPEFULLY MORE CHILDREN!
THIS IS ONE OF YOUR BEST BOOKS EVER LUCY AND I LOVE THEM ALL BUT THIS IS A 5 STAR BOOK!
CONGRATULATIONS ON WRITING THIS BOOK LUCY AS I COULDN’T STOP READING IT!
SINCERELY, SHARON
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I Loved every page of this story! Thank you for a wonderful read, and for this extended epilogue! It was the frosting on the cake!
I am glad you enjoyed it, my dear! ❤️
Enjoyed the book. Good Character development. Intriguing plot. Only downside was having to log in for extended epilogue. Would prefer it all be in same place.
Thank you so much for letting me know, my dear. It means a lot to me!
A good story, but too many misspellings and grammatical errors. Try asking a friend or a professional editor to read your stories before they go to press.
Regina
I would agree. Also, you use “smirk” quite a bit. Make sure that’s the word you really want to use if you really just mean “small smile”.
Otherwise, nice story.
Thank you so much, my dear. It means a lot to me!❤️
Enjoy the book…who really cares!! Are you an English teacher correcting the content…relax and enjoy a beautiful story..
I loved this book, on each page I was looking forward to the next and stayed up very late reading!
Thank you so much for your kind words, dear! I’m really glad you liked it! 🙂
This book was delicious!!! Very romantic and intriguing!! I just love this kind gentle couple!!
This was a book I just could not put down. It is now 12:25 a.m. And I am finally finished. I have been reading these kind of books for years. But I have to say this is one of my favorites! Keep writing Lucy, you are so good at it!!!!
I must admit this is a different story line from the norm in a good way. Although I did know from the beginning who killed Marion. I also liked the fact that the couple featured fell for each other almost immediately. The lovemaking was intense.
I would like to know if I can edit your writing for mistakes. I won’t work for much but I will turn out flawless results.
Veronica;[email protected]
My dear, I’ve sent you an email 🙂
love love loved this story..great job lucy!
Very interesting story I was glad to find out who murdered the Duke ‘s first wife and captured so she would not be a threat any more. I would like a sequel.
Thank you so much for your kind words, dear! I’m really glad you liked it! 🙂
It was a wonderful story concerning two brave and courageous people. I love the strong character s, who also were kind and that they found a extremely loving bond.
Thank you so much for your kind words and support, my dear. I truly appreciate it!
Loved the book was really great reading
I truly appreciate it, my dear Doreen!
So glad you enjoyed the story!
I enjoyed the book tremendously and especially the extended epilogue. I would have loved the epilogue to have contained all of this content and then the extended one to go maybe 4 years in the future with the birth of maybe child number 3 since they both loved children.
Thank you so much for letting me know, my dear Judy. I will keep that in mind!
Make sure to stay tuned because I have more coming!
Loved the story. F.Y.I, a Marquess is a HIGH rank in British Aristocracy outranked ONLY by a Duke. Earls are of a lower ranking than a Marquess. Just a bit annoying when referring to her father as a lowly Marquess!!
Your kind and honest feedback is always welcome, as it helps me become better and better, my dear Karen.
I’ll check with my editor about these.
That was to be my comment also, I think Lucy thought a Marquess was the rank of a Baron which is the lowest rank of the peerage, followed by Viscount, Earl, Marquess and Duke, but a nice read for all that
Thank you so much for pointing this out, my dear Lavinia.
Yes, I agree. I also believe that the correct title for offsprings of rank is either Lady or Lord. For example, Diana is a daughter of a Marquess and hence, she is Lady Diana. Point in case, Princess Diana, prior to marrying Prince Charles, was known as Lady Diana as daughter of an Earl(ranked below a Marquess).
I so enjoyed this story.. Read it all in one day. A warm love story
Thank you so much, my dear Janet!
Breathtaking. Couldn’t put it down. Read all day when I should have been doing other things, just couldn’t put it down until I read it all.
Thank you so much, my dear Kathy!
Hello I enjoyed the’ dukes tempting bride’ only put it down whenever I had something very important to attend to. I especially liked the extended epilogue it made for a smooth well structured ending
Thank you so much, my dear Lystra!
Loved this story, except that a smirk is a rather rude and condescending kind of smile. Otherwise, the characters and story line were very good.
My dear Jessie, thank you so much!
Such a great book with so many twists and turns I love all your books . So glad God has given you a gift of storytelling so we may all enjoy your writing. thank you
In so loving you right now Thank you so much for all you right I really enjoyed the story wright lol
Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear Deborah!
I really enjoyed the book. I couldn’t put it
down till I read it all. Loved it.
Look forward to reading another one
Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear Joanne!
Just finished the story absolutely loved it, quite a few characters in this including the Duke and Dutchess that I would like to hear more about. BRILLIANT SO MUCH ACTION
I loved ready The Duke’s Tempting Bride. And thank you for the Extended Epilogue! A must read for everyone.
I am so glad to hear that, my dear!
I loved this book. Wish it did not end. Wanted to know about the rest of their lives.
Thank you dear Debbie! I am so glad you enjoyed it as much!
Loved the story. Hate the extended epilogues. Put this as part of the book. Much better.
I am so glad to hear that, my dear!
Hi Lucy really enjoyed The Duke’s Tempting Bride I stayed up until early hours to finish it, the characters were so true to life, think your readers like me really bonded with Diana & Fitz, Would of been nice as Judy says extended episode a few years on, would of also been nice to know the name of their Son, as Karla stated, Diana should of been Lady Diana, but it was a really good book, I enjoyed it tremendously, hope you will give us a follow up in the future.
Well Done Lucy 🤗
Regards Alana 😘
Thank you so much for your feedback my dear Alana.
I will keep that in mind! Thank you again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me, they are very helpful.
I hope you enjoy the rest of my stories. Have a great day!
Well Ms. Langton, I have just finished a wonderful book, written by a truly amazing writer. It never ceases to amaze me how one can go from book to book without mixing the characters every once in a while. Just goes to show that there are those who are chosen to bring such joy to their readers such as myself. Please do continue for a long time to come and I will continue to follow.
Thank you so much dear Patricia! I am so grateful for your heartwarming comment! You put a wide smile on my face! ❤️
As an overly grown romantic still, I adore reading good stories of love. I’ve read this book before, but am now able to present my thoughts.
The book is excellent as to its story foundation. I thoroughly enjoyed your build from beginning to emd, which
includes the extended epilogue.
What I’m most excited about, is the immense improvement in spelling!
Give yourself a tight hug as you have earned it and the right to be extremely proud!
Rarely have I enjoyed a book so much, I enjoyed from beginning to end such wonderful characters as Fitz & Diana thank for being a wonderful Author and allowing your books to be read thank you look forward to more enjoyable books.
Thank you so much for your kind words and support my dear Patricia. I’m humbled! So glad you enjoyed the story! Make sure to stay tuned because I have more coming!
Really enjoyed reading it. It was so riveting that i could not stop reading till i finished it in one sitting.
Thank you so much for your lovely words my dear Balbir! I am so glad you enjoyed the story! Make sure to stay tuned because I have more coming!
I thoroughly ednjldd tghisz book and tghe epilogue. Looking forward to reading anothder book by you.
Thank you so much Jayne!
I.really enjoyed the book. My only complaint is with the word smirked being used so frequently. It did not seem to be appropriate for all situations. A smile or grin could have used instead.
Thank you so much for your support and precious feedback dear Mary! It is truly appreciated! ❤️
I enjoyed the book very much. However, I do feel I have to say that a marquess is only one step below a duke. In the book, it is said many times that the marquess is way below the duke, but that is not true. A nQuess is absolutely vegan earl and a viscount.
I meant to say a marquess is above an earl and a viscount
Thank you for your support and feedback dear Freda! I will check if there was indeed any historical inconsistency in the story! 🥰
Thanks cfor the extended Epilogue. It was as enjoyable as the book which was excellent
Thank you so much dear Pamela! I am so glad you enjoyed it! 🔥
Ms Lucy
The Duke’s Tempting Bride was such a wonderful book and the extended epilogue was the icing on the cake. Diana and Fitz were wonderful and I figured out early on that his crazy sister in law killed Marian. It amazes me that people will kill in order to get a man. I was happy that Diana and Fitz fell in love with each other and that their baby was a son. Such a wonderful story.
Thank you
Sharon
Thank you so much for the support and the feedback dear Sharon! I truly appreciate both! 🥰
Enjoyable story and characters. Will continue to thoroughly enjoy all your books.
My dear, I’m really grateful for your support and kind feedback! Stay tuned for more!
Another beautifully written, gripping story that has some surprising revelations. The extended epilogue as usual is also brilliantly written, finishing the characters story’s beautifully. I can’t wait for the next book.
I always like to hear how a few years have passed and what changes have happened in the lives if the Duke and his Duchess. And this one did not dissappoint ! Happy for the happy ending.
Thank you so much for the opportunity to read your book. I enjoyed reading this story, and highly recommend it. A beautifully written story with wonderful characters. I especially loved Diana and Fits. Enjoyed it from the beginning to end and the extend epilogue. There’s romantic, thrilling, suspenseful, funny and mysterious events. It needs some editing though, there are a few errors still through out. Congratulations and again you.
My dear, thank you for letting me know. I’m really grateful for your support and feedback!
A very good and well written story I always enjoy your stories and the characters are very realistic .A very good plot
I really enjoyed your story, I was so thrilled you brought Diana and Fitz together they were perfect for each other. I was disappointed her sister was involved with Natale but very glad they got what they deserved.
Thank you again for a wonderful loving tale. I will keep reading your books as long as you keep writing.
I loved it. I would like to know more about why her sister did what she did. I have my ideas but…
Also, if the sister was sent to the “colonies” was her husband then free to marry again.
Sorry, I think too much
I will keep these in mind, my dear!
Loved your story! Could do without the intimate details though as they are not necessary to create a good love story. The birth of Diana and Fitz son was a nice touch. Would like to read a sequel of the book if one is in the making.
I enjoyed the story with all its ups and downs, challenges and danger. Diana and Fitz had quite the rocky road to travel.
Loved this one! Lots of real life action and even a murder . Really a great read except for typos and misuse of quite a few words. I find this very irritating but even so I understand these errors are not likely in the original manuscript this version was copied from!
Thank you so much, my dear. I will work with my editor on these!
I loved the story. The Duke was still sad but ready for another relationship so that didn’t drag out too long. I really liked Diana’s character. She was strong as level headed. I enjoyed the fact that she actually talked to Fitz instead of becoming a hysterical female. My only problem, and this is a huge pet peeve, is the lack of proofreading. If you had it proofread then you need to get your money back and hire someone else. Sorry it really drives me crazy! However, the story was really good.
I am so glad you enjoyed the story! You’re right, I will work with my editor on these, my dear!
Dear Lucy, What talent you’ve been givin. Thank you for sharing your rich blessing.
This is truly a beautiful love story and I really enjoyed it very much, too bad there had to be two crazy women in the story but it made it a very good exciting story, I highly recommend this book and going to read more of your books, and I really like the extended epilogue, I think that is the part that makes a book even better, thank you.
That was a very enjoyable story. Thank you! I enjoyed the humorous parts and very much enjoyed how honest Diana was. It was so refreshing to read a story where honesty was at the forefront.
Just a thought – you might want to have your editor look the story over again. I bookmarked quite a few errors, such as ‘bare’ for ‘bear’, ‘welded’ instead of ‘welled’ and ‘bazaar’ for ‘bizarre’.
Also, there is a huge repetition of the words ‘figure’ and ‘figured’, ‘bare’, and ‘smirk’. It seemed as if they were smirking all over the place.
I was also curious as to her never wearing gloves, as the Duke kissed her un-gloved hand quite a bit. I thought woman of that time period ALWAYS wore gloves, especially outside.
Also, there was one sentence that stated the Duke hadn’t been with a woman in “many, many years”. I thought his wife had only been dead three years?
I do know that ‘okay’ was not a slang term in that era. I find modern language in historical novels to be a bit jolting.
I am so glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for letting me know, I will work with my editor on these, my dear!
Enjoyed the book so much I only slept 3 hours last night. I very much enjoyed the tenderness and compassion of the Duke and Diane. Her loving care for her parents and compassion for the Duke was heartwarming. I think the underlying heartache of the Duke’s sister in law and Diane’s sister Vivian were briefly touched on lightly covered. Both woman were desperate and their desperation was probably an indication of the times. You possibly could have developed their characters a bit more. Overall a great read! Thanks for your labors.
Enjoyed story and characters. Enough suspense to keep interest going. Have to agree about proofreading – too many errors.
Thank you so much for your kind words, dear! I apologize for the typos…
I do thoroughly enjoyed this book. In fact I read most of it yesterday until it was way past midnight but it was so worth it. Fitz was the perfect man for Diana and she for him. This was such a well written book, I look forward to their further adventures. Thank you so much.
I’m really glad you liked it, my dear! 🙂
Your a wonderful author. Loved the characters and how you bring them to life. Your book was a godsend, as I am staying inside because of the Covid-19 pandemic. It helps to bring me to another time in history and out of this crazy world we are living in. Thank
You for your wonderful imagination.
Thank you so much for your kind words and support, my dear Janet.
So glad you enjoyed the story!
I am so glad that I could read the extended part it was wonderful and it made the whole story real, thank you for a wonderful story , it kept me busy the whole day I loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear Lynn. I truly appreciate it!
The five titles of the peerage, in descending order of precedence, or rank, are: duke, marquess, earl, viscount, baron. The highest rank of the peerage, duke, is the most exclusive.
Lord Casey is not “only a marquess” but in fact only outranked by dukes and Diana should not be Miss Casey but Lady Diana Casey as she is the daughter of a marquess. Diana is a pretty good match for a Duke, lacking only money!
Apart from this lack of understanding of the British peerage and the annoying homonym errors (e.g. bare when bear is meant) I liked this story and didn’t let the editing and proofreading deficiencies get in the way too much, although I would join with other reviewers in urging you to look at your proofreading and editing arrangements more closely.
I really appreciate your kind and honest feedback, my dear Helen!
I’ll check with my editor about these.
I loved it! So different from the many I’ve read.
Was so happy you tied up the loose ends, especially with the extended epilogue.
Thank you for your time in writing this, can’t wait to read more of your books!
I’m glad to hear that you enjoyed it, my dear Kathy! Make sure to stay tuned because I have more coming!”
I loved this book very much. Your style of writing is very real. The main characters were believable and wonderful. Thank you for your wonderful story. I look forward to the next one.
I am glad you enjoyed it, my dear Anna!
This was a marvelous storyline with very realistic characters– the hero/heroine and the malevolent foils, with actions resulting from jealousy and greed. I loved Diana’s practicality and level-headed approach and her care for her parents and friends. As you have probably realized, a marquess is a high-ranking noble, higher than an earl but lower than a duke. You probably meant “baron,” when referring to her father. I am an English teacher, retired, and noticed an increasing number of grammatical errors, syntax too modern for that era, and some vocabulary and spelling errors. Probably rushing to finish, perhaps. Proofreading by a knowledgeable grammarian would only enhance your writing skills. Do keep writing more of your interesting books!
I will keep that in mind, my dear Lela!
I loved the way you put this story together from beginning to end liked the way they fell in love and appreciate the closeness of her
to her parents. I liked the epilogue that they did not have a child the first year.and the rule about loaning money to her siblings so that they could spend family time together. Would like to know what happenes to them in a few years down the road as I enjoyed this couple’s story very much. Wonderfully done dear.
I really enjoyed this story. Diana and Fitz are both enjoyable characters. I liked how they were honest and forthright with each other. The extended epilogue tied up the loose ends nicely. Would be interested in reading more of their story as years go by.
I will keep that in mind, my dear Mary!
I do enjoyed this book. It brought out the characters beautifully. The mystery of his wife death was handled skillfully and part of it was a surprising ending. One inasmuch compassion for her parents and the sT that Fritz handled telling them. It was a pleasure to read of a man who truely loved his wife and children. It would be nice as another reader said to read about what happened when the family became larger. This was thoroughly enjoyable reading and hard to put down and never wanting to skip pages to see what would happen next. To bad there aren’t more Fritzs around. Thank you for writing this story.
Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear!
As always I wasn’t disappointed with this book. Very well written can’t wait for the next book that continue the story it you decide to write it. Love all the books that you have written. Kept up the good work.
Thank you so much, my dear Brenda!
Loved this story.
Since Lady Douglas’ tiredness was mentioned so many times, I would like to have known what her true ailment was.
This story also shows how one person’s love and wit can bring a host of good changes in loved ones as well as healing hearts. That was Diana’s purpose as well as raising her child(dren).
Also, a younger sibling and an older sibling can experience different upbringing in the same family. Interesting. This will help me as I minister to others.
Loved the lovemaking also. It is a natural aspect of eros love.
AMAZING STORY of an arranged marriage along with jealousy, greed, murder, And of course love 💘.
Overall a great book. Read it in almost one sitting as couldn’t put it down. All about arranged marriage, murder and love. Enjoyed the extended epilogue too. Always lovely to read what happens after “the happily ever after”. Spotted a few spellings and grammar mistakes and that could be annoying so please get them proof read. Also Diana’s father title is only one below a Duke’s. Your story implies he is much lower ranked but he is not. Also, I feel some of the names of the Lords are too modern. ie. Lord Casey does not sound very like it was a regency name.
Can’t wait the other books. Well done.
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback, my dear Emily!
Loved reading this book from beginning to end. Wonderful story with all it’s intrigue and passion. Didn’t want it to end. Great Extended Epilogue, but wouldn’t mind reading more about their son and future family and their relationship with the Duke’s dear friends. 5 stars.
Thank you so much my dear Ann! I’m really grateful for your support and kind words!
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Hi Lucy, I have only recently started reading your books but thank you so much for the wonderful well rounded stories. Loving the characters in this book and the story has a little of everything – family dynamics, showing fun with children, passion, mystery. Love the extended epilogue too.
Keep writing. 5 stars.
I’m humbled, my dear Sue! I’m really grateful for your support and kind feedback!
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I enjoyed the story , but most of the time smile would have been much more appropriate over smirk. You truly need a better copy editor for there were many grammatical errors and it seemed you lost track of your characters sex from one page to the next.
Thank you for your honest feedback, my dear Stephanie. I really appreciate it! It’s always welcome, as it helps me become better and better. I’ll check with my editor about these. Have a lovely day!
I’m never disappointed by your books and I’m kept thoroughly entertained. It is impressive that you are able to introduce new aspects to a historic romance that make the story fresh and unique. Thank you.
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Really enjoyed the story and I could not put it down. Good story line and as always a happy ending and a family to raise and hopefully that they will have a lot more children to look after.
Thank you so much for your kind words and support my dear Lynda. I am so glad you enjoyed the book! Make sure to stay tuned because I have more coming!
I love this book could not wait to get to the end keep up the good job
So glad you enjoyed the book dear Heather! Thank you so much! Make sure to stay tuned because I have more coming!
I loved the story. It starts out as an arranged marriage of convenience with Fitz wanting to have children and Diana’s need for financial stability. As they get to meet each other, it turns into admiration and love. They are both very nice people. I think you have great ideas but what you lack is good proofreading and editing. Many have already pointed out that a marquis is a high title below only a duke and so she should have always been Lady Diana and not Miss Casey. There were some spelling errors and sometimes there were mix ups in names. Initially it was Lord Michael Douglas and later he is referred to as Michele or else I got confused with the various names. When they go to the village for a visit, Lord and Lady Casey stayed home while Lord and Lady Douglas went in the carriage with them. However, you have Lord and Lady Casey dismounting from the carriage. Even though these are minor errors, it does take away from the enjoyment of reading the book. Good story though.
Thank you so much for your feedback and thorough analysis dear Madhu.
You are raising some valid points and have a solid justification for them. I will keep them in mind and will work closer with my editor to get them handled in the future. Also we are slowly addressing the issue concerning our Proofreaders and hope that we will soon have new members joining our proofreading team!
Thank you again for taking the time to share your thoughts with me, they are very helpful. I hope you enjoy the rest of my stories. Have a great day!
Loved the book! I always like when the heroine is a no nonsense lady. Also good story telling, no “endeless suffering”, just nice events.
I confess that the concept of Lord Casey being a lowly marquess was strange, but what the heck “it is fiction”!
Funny that Lord Douglas ended up being “Michelle”after the first half of the book!
Was also expecting the extended epilogue to have at least 3 or 4 children…
First time I have ever posted a comment, so that shows how I enjoyed it.
Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much dear Cecilia! It really means a lot to me! 🥰 Keep inspiring me with your loving support!
I really enjoyed the book. Finally a plot with mostly nice events accuring in the story, not just suffering and scheming on the part of the heroine, Diana., who was a lady with capital letters. Fitz is also a true hero to me because of his loyalty, compassion and wits. I love it when love conquers all.
As some other readers mentioned there were some spelling and grammatical errors in the book and mixed up names, but nevertheless an enjoyable book. I couldn’t wait to read it till the end.
I would really love to read more about their family, maybe a sequel about their children all grown up and searching for love.
Keep up the good work.
Thank you so much dear Daisy! I am grateful for the loving support and the precious feedback you provide! ✨ I am very glad you enjoyed it as much!
As much as I enjoy your plots, my enjoyment becomes a moment of agitation with the glaring errors. An example in ‘The Dukes Tempting Bride’ was when “Michael” became “Michelle” in the last chapters. I also don’t think the word “version” was used in that era to describe people and their life phases, though I have encountered this use of the phrase in other writer’s stories set in the same era. If you have not already done so, Ms. Langston, I strongly recommend a new proofreader, maybe two, to eliminate these errors and increase your reader’s engagement in your books.
I will continue to read your books and enjoy them very much, except when I cringe at the frequent errors.
Thank you so much for your honest feedback and constant support dear! I will take it into account while writing my new story!
I enjoyed this story but there are some typing errors. Duke Fitz was a widower whose wife had been murdered. He decided to find a bride for an arranged marriage. His search took him to Diana, the daughter of Lord Casey. During their courtship Diana and Fitz realised they had feelings for each other. Their relationship became intimate and they were looking forward to their wedding. However, there were several people who wished them harm. Would they be able to ruin a growing relationship before their wedding? Read on and enjoy this slightly steamy story.
Thank you so much for the support and feedback dear Doreen!